Faulty Comparison
Most faulty, or incorrect, comparisons occur when two items are compared that should not be. To quickly identify these types of errors, students should ask themselves, “are apples being compare to apples here… or oranges? While the comparison may be incorrect grammatically, the comparison might instead not make logical sense. Consider the following example.
My essay about the Harlem Renaissance, which was well-crafted and organized, far surpassed Katie.
In this example, students should ask themselves, “what is the apple?” That is, what is the focus of the comparison? In this case, the essay is attempting to be compared to Katie, rather than to Katie’s essay. Here are two possible ways to correct this sentence.
My essay about the Harlem Renaissance, which was well-crafted and organized, far surpassed Katie’s essay.
My essay about the Harlem Renaissance, which was well-crafted and organized, far surpassed that of Katie.
As faulty comparisons are commonly found on the error identification subsection of the SAT, students should heighten their awareness of this error when completing practice tests in The Official SAT Study Guide or other SAT prep book.
Misuse of Adjectives and Adverbs
Students commonly confuse these two parts of speech and often do not realize when they have erroneously used one instead of the other. To clarify the difference, students should take note of the following definitions.
- Adjective: modifies a noun or a pronoun; the passionate orator
- Adverb: describes a verb, adjective, or another adverb; the extremely passionate orator
In this challenging economy, homebuyers are hoping to find decent priced houses.
In this sentence, we need a word that describes priced, which is being used as an adjective describing houses. Any word modifying an adjective must be an adverb; therefore, decent must be changed to the adverb decently in order for the sentence to be grammatically correct.
In the following example, the wrong form of adverb is used. Students should see if they can spot the error.
After attending two colleges, I decided I liked the first one best.
This sentence is written using a superlative adverb, best. To correct this error, the comparative form of the adverb, better, should be used as only two colleges are being compared. In order to use the superlative form, writers must compare three or more items, such as in the correctly constructed sentence below.
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